我想听听你/妳的意见

"Appreciate the hard work by EHS and is good to have a greener environment, but those half dead trees "body" is yet to be clear off/ "buried" / taken care off from the car park area since yesterday. I saw the plastic bag torn out is all over the plant area still…(and as you can see also from your attached photos). We need to ensure the environment is clean and no waste should caught our eyesight. This is just a little bit of what I've seen and felt which would like to share and highlight to you. No offence and hope you understand. Thanks."

对于以上的这一段被剪摘出来的文字，看官觉得怎样？有何意见？
没有意见的话，我就无法与阁下分享下一篇咯。。。
所以，欢迎你/妳留言咯～(请给予我一点点与你/妳互动的机会嘛，以弥补近期少产的我）谢谢！^_^